1. I think we can get 7 scores in our writing.
2. I think I always finish my tasks on schedule, and my keypal will response me at once. We would bring up our thought respectively about the questions. Up to now, we have exchanged our viewpoints from seven different issues. I think when we toward every issue, we are similar to each other, except the issue of Britney Spears. However, in the second time we also responded to each other timely, we can not only mutual understanding but also contemplate peer’s thought again.
3. I think my keypal is perfect for his writing skill; on the contrary, I think I need to pay more attention to some minor errors and avoid translating the Chinese sentences into English directly.
Comparing with others’ blogs, we can get 8 scores in our writing. My keypal could elaborate her thought in this program. Especially in the “strawberry generation” issue, her writing is extremely smooth and coherent. Wendy used a lot of proper conjunction and paid attention to the connection between sentences. For this strawberry girl, she must work hard on her writing skill.
回覆刪除Wendy’s comment above flatters me a lot. The true is that my writing progresses much in this in-service program. From bottom of my heart, words couldn’t express my thanks to professors in this program. However, there is still a large space toward perfect writing. I found my writing deviated from the main idea. The reader might feel difficult to read the essay.